Very welcome. I'm working on a comic too but I've yet to produce any results. I'm to busy studying what it is I'm drawing. I have to draw a massive airship exploding in the sky and descending in a ball of flames and smoke to the ground. All of whom were aboard fall helplessly to the ground. I have to use reference from 9/11 and The Hindenburg incident. It's fun. :D
Thank you very much for the input! I'll take your advices to heart and remember them whenever I try to do another sheet manga. :3
Don't be afraid to critique my heart, I don't easily get offended, actually I'm very honored you took the time to comment and let me know how you thought about it. I appreciate a lot for your input. Thank you! <3
Panel Composition isn't easy. Be careful with the way you design your boxes. You can easily mislead the reader. When I first got a look at the panels as a whole, my attention was scattered across the page. At a second glance, it was directed first and foremost to the white space "between" the panels. Perhaps the gap is to large? Due to my untrained eye, I personally think I'm talking out my a** but I'm just trying to help. D'x
On the positive side, the design is pretty slick. Very neat and once you know whether your reading to the left or right, it's not hard to figure out the flow of the story and art. Great job with the layout. :]
Last edited by The Shirt at 4:26:10 AM CDT on April 28, 2011.
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/05/11 | Reply
@The Shirt:
Oh wow! Sounds super awesome already! :D
Best of luck with your manga and with life in general as well! <3
The crazy bubbly shadow
The Shirt
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/05/11 | Reply
@ShadowLight:
Very welcome. I'm working on a comic too but I've yet to produce any results. I'm to busy studying what it is I'm drawing. I have to draw a massive airship exploding in the sky and descending in a ball of flames and smoke to the ground. All of whom were aboard fall helplessly to the ground. I have to use reference from 9/11 and The Hindenburg incident. It's fun. :D
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/05/11 | Reply
@The Shirt:
Thank you very much for the input! I'll take your advices to heart and remember them whenever I try to do another sheet manga. :3
Don't be afraid to critique my heart, I don't easily get offended, actually I'm very honored you took the time to comment and let me know how you thought about it. I appreciate a lot for your input. Thank you! <3
The crazy bubbly shadow
The Shirt
Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/28/11 | Reply
Panel Composition isn't easy. Be careful with the way you design your boxes. You can easily mislead the reader. When I first got a look at the panels as a whole, my attention was scattered across the page. At a second glance, it was directed first and foremost to the white space "between" the panels. Perhaps the gap is to large? Due to my untrained eye, I personally think I'm talking out my a** but I'm just trying to help. D'x
On the positive side, the design is pretty slick. Very neat and once you know whether your reading to the left or right, it's not hard to figure out the flow of the story and art. Great job with the layout. :]
Last edited by The Shirt at 4:26:10 AM CDT on April 28, 2011.